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In
Out
In
Out
Methodic
Rhythm
Should
Sooth
But I'm so freaking mad
That
It's
Not
Working
Because I'm feeling way too murderous
To
Calm
Down
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
There
That's
Better
©2009 ~bubblepup13
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Author's Comments

I like how this one turned out, with the longer lines representing a sudden flood of emotion.

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:icongrimsbloody:
I like it. It shows how one focuses in on the anger; taking in things fast but then again in stages.

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I think that is the perfect ingredient for this disaster.
:icondaisyj201:
yea capturing the emotion in the physical structure of the poem as well as in the words gives it a whole other deminsion of description. well done, me like :D

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